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Zelda Legends - Village Square - Fan Fiction

Fan Fiction


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Memories of the Past

By Kairi
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Chapter 1: In a Strange Dream

A girl at the age of 17 was asleep in her bed. She was having a strange dream as she slept.

In the dream, she was trapped in a strange pink-like crystal in the air. The crystal was transparent so she would be able to see what was outside it.

"I can't get out! I'm trapped!" thought the girl

She looked down at the ground to see two people fighting.

One of them was a boy the same age as her, wearing green clothes and a green hat. He had blonde hair, blue eyes and pointy ears. In his hands was a shield and a sword. This boy looked familiar.

The other one was a huge man with firey red hair, yellow eyes, and dark skin. For some reason, that man scared her in a way she couldn't describe.

Looking at the two, she saw that they were both tired of the battle, but still kept going at it.

The girl saw that the boy in green was panting and had sweat, dripping down his face.

Suddenly, the girl felt the place shake. It scared her at first.

Then she saw that the boy in green had struke the final blow to the man he was fight.

After the fight was over, the crystal that the girl was in lowered to the ground, and the pink prison disappeared.

Just then, the place started to shake even more than before.

The girl then felt a warm hand grasp hers, and looked up to find that it was the boy's hand that grabbed it.

"Come on! We have to go now before this place falls apart!" said the boy.

The girl then started to follow the boy, until they reached the bottom and outside the place that they were in.

When the two were outside, the girl looked back to see the place that they were in was now in ruin.

"Good thing that we got out in time!" thought the girl.

Suddenly, the two felt the ground shake; the boy that was with her, went to see what it was.

When he got close to the ruins, a wall of fire blocked the two from getting closer.

Then out of the ruins, came the man that the boy was fighting.
He looked angry and held up his hand and on the back of it were three triangles that were linked together. The top one was glowing while the other two were shaded.

Suddenly, the man transformed into a huge monster that had two huge weapons to go with it.

"Oh my God, he's butt ugly!" thought the girl.

When the boy tried to slash his sword at the monster, it swinged its own weapon and knocked the sword from the boy's hand, and landed at the girl's feet.

"That was a close call! That sword would have hit me!" thought the girl.

Then the monster slashed at the boy, and blood started to come out of the injury that the boy received.

"Come on! Wake up boy in green!" cried the girl.

The boy didn't get up.

But when the monster heard the girl, it came over to her and held it's weapon up, ready to kill her.

The girl felt fear spreading through her body, and then she woke up.

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Comments on this chapter

Koroks Rock says:

OK, you have a couple of things you can do to improve your writing. First and most importantly, try to group your paragraphs together a bit more- you string everything out too much, which isn't something I find myself saying much. l;happy.gif Regardless, try and put sentences of similar topics together into longer paragraphs- it may help to add some extra description between to link them up (uhh... really bad joke).

Secondly, go over your commas. You put them in very odd places- they only belong where you pause when speaking, to catch a breath or seperate ideas. Your story sounds like the narrator is hyperventilating.

Kairi says:

This is the author of this story. I understand that it has bad paragraphs and all, but to tell you the truth, I'm not really good at paragraphs. I'm just doing the best I can to make the story good. So far, I would say it's good.

Kairi says:

This is my first fan fiction. I hope you all like it. I just got these ideas in my head, basically. I'll write the next chapter today. Oh, and by the way, today is May 19th.

madiboo says:

I'm liking this story so far. Let me guss, it's based on Ocarina of Time.

Kairi says:

How did you know? And thank you for your moment, madiboo. Yes it is based on Ocarina of Time. I love that game so much too! It may have a few errors in paragraph making, but as I wrote, I'm not good at making paragraphs. ENJOY!

firehexer says:

It reminds me the first time I saw Zelda trapped in the crystal:

«Hey, bro! Look! Zelda is trapped in a rupee!»

Kairi says:

Ha Ha! Good one! Oh, and just so you know, it's kinda based on Ocarina of Time. As in same Hyrule, charatcers except of Zelda (You'll all see why), same places, and is basically 7 years after Link goes back in the past to relive his childhood. And while I'm at it, when will the person that is reading chapter 2 for approval post the chapter to the story? I want people to read this, since it all came out of my head in ideas!

star_breaker says:

Wow! This has the makings of an excellent story if you improve the grammar. I love OoT too! So far, this is really good. I'm off to read your next chapter...