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Zelda Legends - Village Square - Fan Fiction

Fan Fiction


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The return of Gyorgh!

By Zorawarrior
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Chapter 1: A musician warrior

A musician warrior

In a contry of zoras, we hear a melody; the New Wave Bossa Nova (it's a music of Majora's mask). In a village of zoras (under an ocean), a musician play the music on a guitar. He's name? Likau. We knock on his local door. Likau open the door and discover a strange zora.
-Hi!
-It's a letter of your father.
-Tanks. Say Likau wile taking letter.
Likau reads the letter:
For my son, Likau.
Likau, the time is near... The time of battle.
Majora are return... With is four guardians.
Majora decide to send each guardians in another contries.
Unfortunely, Link can't defeat all of them, because the four guardians are too far.
Gyorgh choose your country.
I ask you for defeat Gyorgh.
Im sure you are able.
Of Malikau.
Likau dont lose time: he do is pack. He gets
out of the village.
The adventure begin...

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Comments on this chapter

Koroks Rock says:

Are you from Lévis france or Quebec? Either way, your english is somewhat... rudimentary, so if you want me to help you edit it, I will.

Some general advice is to avoid first person, and put dialog inside of quotation marks, "Like this."

firehexer says:

It can be a good story if it will be longer, too.

star_breaker says:

yeah... it is a little confusing though :S

Person says:

I really can't understand what is going on. This sounds like it was translated from another language to English using out-of-place words and phrases. The grammar also needs some improvement.