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The Saviors of Two Worlds
By dragondemonangelMore Info / Reviews
Chapter 1: Welcome to Hyrule,Sakura
The guards head turned towards the girl. She was certainly a strange one. Her hair was blacker than midnight and cut about an inch above her shoulders. She wore a black,long-sleeve tunic and long pants of the same color. There seemed to be a thin silver chain around her neck,but if something was at the end of it, it was hidden under her shirt. She had a plain traveling pack that seemed rather thin,although there was still something inside. She had a long glaive at her back. It was a silver-gray color with a sleek,polished blade at the end. She was strangely barefoot. Most people had boots,for the terrain,while beautiful,was rather dangerous. Her eyes were what intrigued him most. They were like none he had ever seen. They were mostly a clear hazel,but there were swirls of a dark blue-green and flecks of amber gold around the pupils.
The teenage girl looked around. The intense heat from the sun that day beat down on her lightly tanned skin. Her elegantly pointed ears picked up every sound,whether it was a mouse skittering across the floor or shopowners selling their wares. Her strange,almond-shaped eyes searched the market,looking for a place where she could rest. After nearly two months of travel without stop,she desperatly needed a rest. She saw a large temple of sorts of in the North-eastern part of the Town Square. She headed towards it,wondering how her sister was doing.
Once she got there,she took a seat against one of the walls,glad for the cool shade. She opened up her pack,letting out the small dragon. It was a sleek black with dark violet eyes. Its semi-transperant wings were tipped with ivory bone and her curved talons were purest quartz. The dragon shook herself free of the confing,leather pack. Sakura smiled and gently stroked the leathery wings,then reached in and got out a nearly empty waterskin. She drank a bit down,feeling the icy water cool her burning throat. She offered some to the dragon who took a few short gulps and then settled next to her mistress for a nice nap.
Sakura leaned back against the cool,gray stones of the Temple of TIme. Little did she know,that there was a certain evil force after her.
The teenage girl looked around. The intense heat from the sun that day beat down on her lightly tanned skin. Her elegantly pointed ears picked up every sound,whether it was a mouse skittering across the floor or shopowners selling their wares. Her strange,almond-shaped eyes searched the market,looking for a place where she could rest. After nearly two months of travel without stop,she desperatly needed a rest. She saw a large temple of sorts of in the North-eastern part of the Town Square. She headed towards it,wondering how her sister was doing.
Once she got there,she took a seat against one of the walls,glad for the cool shade. She opened up her pack,letting out the small dragon. It was a sleek black with dark violet eyes. Its semi-transperant wings were tipped with ivory bone and her curved talons were purest quartz. The dragon shook herself free of the confing,leather pack. Sakura smiled and gently stroked the leathery wings,then reached in and got out a nearly empty waterskin. She drank a bit down,feeling the icy water cool her burning throat. She offered some to the dragon who took a few short gulps and then settled next to her mistress for a nice nap.
Sakura leaned back against the cool,gray stones of the Temple of TIme. Little did she know,that there was a certain evil force after her.
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- Chapter 1: Welcome to Hyrule,Sakura
- Chapter 2: An Unexpected Meeting
- Chapter 3: Sakura's Question and Link's Answer
- Chapter 4: The Journey Begins
- Chapter 5: A New Enemy
- Chapter 6: Ambush!Captured!
- Chapter 7: A Tyrant's Face
- Chapter 8: A New Girl
- Chapter 9: Escape
- Chapter 10: Friends or Foes?
- Chapter 11: Solitarian,Village of Mysteries
- Chapter 12: Welcome to my Life
- Chapter 13: Many Questions and Few Answers
- Chapter 14: Preparing
- Chapter 15: The Cries of War
- Chapter 16: Old Rivalries
- Chapter 17: The Final Battle Begins
- Chapter 18: An Enemy Gone
- Chapter 19: A Fighting Chance
- Chapter 20: A Forgotten Power
- Chapter 21: Arrow of Hope
- Chapter 22: Aftermath
- Chapter 23: Goodbyes
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Zeldas Shadow says:
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Boggy says:
I would, however, refrain from using excessive physical descriptions to define your character. I tend to avoid the "dark hair, dark eye" stereotype, opting instead to describe unique characteristics through personal/obsessive habits (i.e. neuroticism or anxiety). Remember, details are only as important as the purpose they serve (i.e. how much it effects the story).
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Vaati_Lover says:
Now, as some others said, there are a few errors in your story, but not many, so it's understandable.