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Zelda Legends - Village Square - Fan Fiction

Fan Fiction


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The Wind Waker

By powerlink12
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Chapter 1: Happy Birthday Link!!!

"Big brother?!" a little girl named Arill yelled, coming out of her house.

"Big brother?! Where are you?!" Arill yelled again, running down the steps and next to the island postbox. No answer.

Arill started to run while calling her brothers name. Suddenly, Arill stopped and smiled. He's up on the watch tower, she thought. She remembered her brother saying he was going to the tower for some air the night before.

Arill ran across a small bridge and through grass and stopped at another bridge. "Big brother?!" Arill yelled, staring up at the watch tower. She ran across the long bridge and climbed a long ladder.

Once she got to the top, she found her brother sleeping. Arill smiled and climbed on the flat surface.

"Big brother, wake up!" Arill insisted, jumping up and down.

The movement of Arill jumping made Link, Arill's brother, shot straight up, startled.

"Finally!" Arill laughed, and helped Link up. Link rubbed his eyes and yawned. "Hi, Arill. Thanks for waking me up." Link said, stretching.

"Well, I HAD to wake you up, Link. Cause today is a very special day! And you do know what today is, don't you big brother?" Arill asked excitedly.

Link shook his head. "It's your BIRTHDAY, Link!" Arill said loudly. Link's eyes went wide. "Are you seriuos, Arill?" Link asked, talking more faster. Arill smiled and nodded.

Link started to dance. He took Arill's hand and started to dance with her. After they stopped dancing, Arill looked up at her brother's face and said, "Close your eyes, big brother. I got a suprise for you." Arill told him. Link did what he was told.

"Now, hold out your hands." Arill said. Link held them out. Arill set a telescope in his hands and said, "Okay. Open them!"

Link opened his eyes and smiled wide. The telescope was reddish brown wood. It had gold designs on it, and was so smooth. "T-Thanks." Link stammered. "Your welcome. Now, go on to the house. Grandma wants you. She said she also had a suprise for you. Wants your done, come back and try out the telescope. Then, we get ready for your big party. Grandma said she was going to make your favorite soup. Now go on!" Arill gave Link a little shove for a start.

Link said bye to his sister and climbed down the ladder. Then he ran all the way to his house.

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Comments on this chapter

Koroks Rock says:

Ehm... I hate to burst any bubbles, but it's spelled Aryll. I hope this gets a bit more original as you go along- this is the fan fiction gallery after all.

We'll see where this goes.

achitka says:

Well, you have the beginning down and that's a good thing. I'm always interested in TWW fanfics so I suppose I'll wander back later to see what you've come up with.

powerlink12 says:

I don't want to be mean, but i'm always writing stories and I know how to write them...but thanks for saying it's a good thing...and thanks for talling me how to spell Aryll.... smile.gif

Anime James says:

This is an example of a fanfic that could have been written much better. From the very beginning there should be plot twists, surprises and foreshadowing - you just copied down what's from the game. It wasn't much of a treat to read, either. All in all, I can't see how reading this would make any sense when we have the actual game, which you're competing with - you'll never win, so you should at least break up the story and try new things. Just like those OoT stories, where the battle with Ganon consists of, 'Link, you have to hit his tail it's his only weakspot! Hurry Link the fate of the world rests in your hands!!!'

Know what I mean?

powerlink12 says:

uh, if your telling me what to do for the game...don't!!! I already beat it. well, anyways i'm making a new story now...bye!!!!

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Anime James says:

Here's a tip: don't be so overconfident. A little self-consciousness never hurts; reread your story and ask yourself how it can be improved. No one can ever reach perfection, so there's always something available to tweak. Once it is as good as you can possibly get it, the submit it. And over time your skills will develope and develope until you're smoothing out the wrinkles automatically; the ones that you didn't even know existed when you first wrote the fic.

If I sound harsh, I don't mean to be. Just honest.

WindWakerJabun says:

Its good but should be more original!